Pitch

We have faced a lot of decisions in the editing process whether it be to change the music or add an effect which we have found hard to decide whether to do or not as one little thing can change the whole tone of the sequence. We have taken to our peers to help us with these decisions and most recently asked the group next to us to watch what we have done so far and comment on what they thought could be improved. They mainly said that the editing needed improving inparticular fading and adding extra effects to make it seem more funny and modern. We asked them what they would think to a split screen and they thought this would be a good idea as our footage exceeds the time limit and it adds a bit of variation. We have decided to add a split screen where the screen splits into four and we see a zoom on each indivual piece regarding the cat and it ends in us seeing the cats poo. We also decided to do extreme fading in certain bits where he is trying to get his deodrant can to work as this adds more comedy value. We are continuing to edit our piece to its full potential but do not want to interrupt its concept of a journey with too many split screens or effects.