Nearing the end

We have now come to a point where we have a rendered version of our second project, and hopefully a final draft in the very near future.

We have three different variations of this project as after feedback and experimenting we made different improvements and tested out different things on each. The first draft shows the girl character being quite scary, these shots are all very central but are good footage we just didnt include the girls face and her walking seemed as though she was the scary character. This draft had a very good ending and the middle of the piece was well edited just lacking in quality content

DRAFT ONE video

The second draft had a different character in and the shots were in daylight however, the lack of mise en scene didnt emphasise enough that this girl was innocent and vulnerable and we also needed a lot more shots of the setting and some establishing shots, the concept needed more background. This draft had the including of the ballerina figurine and ballet shoes from extra shots which helped us develop our concept and the inside shots of the house emphasised the girls character, her shots were just lacking.

DRAFT TWO video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dva8yOj_XN8&feature=youtu.be

The third and hopefully final draft includes new shots where the girl is off centre and is walking quite fast paced with specific mise en scene. The girl has a bag, a necklace, a skirt and we also see her face and facial expression giving more background and emotion. This draft has added music with specific music for the climax at the end. We have used opacity more thoroughly and organised the shots so the piece flows better and it all leads to the climax. This draft has our desired music, effective titles and has been edited as well as we think it can be. We are now waiting to evaluate and get feedback on this final draft.

DRAFT THREE video http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8NJxWh0Qe5k